Ameliorate Bull Run

Directions: students should grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red. 

After the first shots of the war at fort sumter the first major battle of the civil war occurred on July 21 1861 near a creek called bull run.

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Suggested Answer:
After the first shots of the war at Fort Sumter, the first major battle of the Civil War occurred on July 21, 1861, near a creek called Bull Run.