Wednesday, April 20, 2016

Ameliorate Chosin Reservoir

This passage has missing capitals, two missing commas, two missing periods, an extra apostrophe, and two misspelled words.

during the korean war of 1950-1951, U.S. Murines faced off with chinese Communist troops at the battel of chosin reservoir extreme cold mountainous terrain and human wave attack's took a heavy toll on american troops




Answer: During the Korean War of 1950-1951, U.S. Marines faced off with Chinese Communist troops at the Battle of Chosin Reservoir. Extreme cold, mountainous terrain, and human wave attacks took a heavy toll on American troops.

Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Ameliorate the Forbidden City

This passage is missing capitals, a comma, and two periods. It has an extra apostrophe (') and a misspelled word.

during the ming and qing dynastie's in china the capital city of beijing was home to the forbidden City this vast complex was the personal city of the emperor, and was named because common people were not alloud to enter




Answer: During the Ming and Qing dynasties in China, the capital city of Beijing was home to the Forbidden City. This vast complex was the personal city of the emperor, and was named because common people were not allowed to enter.

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Ameliorate the Taj Mahal!

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the taj mahal one of the greatest examples of indian architecture was bilt by a mughal ruler named shah jahan he built it as a grand tomb for his beloved wife but it is a major tourist attraction today




Answer: The Taj Mahal, one of the greatest examples of Indian architecture, was built by a Mughal ruler named Shah Jahan. He built it as a grand tomb for his beloved wife, but it is a major tourist attraction today.


Sunday, April 17, 2016

Ameliorate the Imperial Harem!

This passage has missing capitals, a missing comma, three missing periods, a missing apostrophe ( ' ), and a misspelled word.

a harem is part of an islamic household forbidden to men where wives and female relatives live in the ottoman empire the sultans mother controlled his harem this gave her extreem power over him

Even the sultan could not enter the harem




The harem building

Eunuchs (castrated men) were made into important guards to prevent funny business!

Answer: A harem is part of an Islamic household forbidden to men, where wives and female relatives live. In the Ottoman Empire, the sultan's mother controlled his harem. This gave her extreme power over him.