Monday, September 26, 2016

Ameliorate the Eastern Faiths

Directions: This passage contains two misspelled words, two missing periods, four missing capitals, and three missing commas.

hinduism an buddhism two polytheistic faiths which originated in india both contain the idea of reincarnation according to their followers repeatedly living a good life will bring yur soul closer to spiritual perfection


Hinduism and Buddhism, two polytheistic faiths which originated in India, both contain the idea of reincarnation. According to their followers, repeatedly living a good life will bring your soul closer to spiritual perfection.

Tuesday, September 20, 2016

Ameliorate the Twelve Tables

Directions: There are three missing capitals, a missing period, a misspelled word, and two missing dashes (--). Dashes are longer hyphens (-) and separate sentences into statements like parentheses do.

the twelve tables established the idea that all free citizens patricians and plebeians had a write to the protection of the law



Answer: The Twelve Tables established the idea that all free citizens, patricians and plebeians, had a right to the protection of the law.

Thursday, September 15, 2016

Ameliorate Alexander

This passage has 9 missing capitals, 3 missing periods, a misspelled word, and a missing comma.

alexander the great is often known as the greatest reek general to ever live however he was actually from a region north of greece called macedonia he conquered an empire from greece to india before he was 35


Answer: Alexander the Great is often known as the greatest Greek general to ever live. However, he was actually from a region north of Greece called Macedonia. He conquered an empire from Greece to India before he was 35.

Thursday, September 1, 2016

Ameliorate the Bronze Age

This passage has 4 missing capitals, two missing periods, a misspelled word, and two missing commas.


the bronze age marks the beginning of advanced civilization people began to make strong metal tools build citys and develop writing




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Answer: The Bronze Age marks the beginning of advanced civilization. People began to make strong metal tools, build cities, and develop writing.

Wednesday, April 20, 2016

Ameliorate Chosin Reservoir

This passage has missing capitals, two missing commas, two missing periods, an extra apostrophe, and two misspelled words.

during the korean war of 1950-1951, U.S. Murines faced off with chinese Communist troops at the battel of chosin reservoir extreme cold mountainous terrain and human wave attack's took a heavy toll on american troops




Answer: During the Korean War of 1950-1951, U.S. Marines faced off with Chinese Communist troops at the Battle of Chosin Reservoir. Extreme cold, mountainous terrain, and human wave attacks took a heavy toll on American troops.

Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Ameliorate the Forbidden City

This passage is missing capitals, a comma, and two periods. It has an extra apostrophe (') and a misspelled word.

during the ming and qing dynastie's in china the capital city of beijing was home to the forbidden City this vast complex was the personal city of the emperor, and was named because common people were not alloud to enter




Answer: During the Ming and Qing dynasties in China, the capital city of Beijing was home to the Forbidden City. This vast complex was the personal city of the emperor, and was named because common people were not allowed to enter.

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Ameliorate the Taj Mahal!

This passage has missing capitals, three commas, two periods, and a misspelled word.

the taj mahal one of the greatest examples of indian architecture was bilt by a mughal ruler named shah jahan he built it as a grand tomb for his beloved wife but it is a major tourist attraction today




Answer: The Taj Mahal, one of the greatest examples of Indian architecture, was built by a Mughal ruler named Shah Jahan. He built it as a grand tomb for his beloved wife, but it is a major tourist attraction today.