Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Ameliorate Jacob Riis

Directions: grammatically correct the sentence(s) below, in red. There are two missing periods, a missing capital, and one missing comma.


Jacob Riis wanted to literally show the the world the dangers of the immigrant neighborhoods that he saw every day so Riis taught himself photography and began taking a camera with him at night


Video (1:21:50 - 1:31:34)

correction: 
Jacob Riis wanted to literally show the the world the dangers of the immigrant neighborhoods that he saw every day. So, Riis taught himself photography and began taking a camera with him at night.

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